Please read and rate my story so far. Please.?

For 13 I think its awesome. Now I want to finish reading it. I think your attention to details really makes it. You made me feel like I was there. I could see her in bed I could see them on the bus. I was hoping they didn't sense me and all turn into roaches lol. I think you should try to get it plublished and u could make some good money in the youth section. When I was 13 this would be right up my alley. Keep it up. Let me know what happens. I want to read it.